Hey what can I do to improve this short story?
Well I am writing a short story for english, that is supposed to be based on snow, factory, dolls, eyes, or at least have them in it. I have produced this (its copyrighted :P) and I need to know how to make it better coz it sucks :( Nellie MerryLand was quite unlike the other [...]


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